1. Iron Fist Was Guest-Starring In His Own Story
The Rand Corporation (as well as his siblings) are important to Danny Rand/Iron Fist’s narrative, but the series often felt like Rand was a guest-star in his own story.
In a 2-hour movie you can (arguably) get away with an under-developed hero or villain (and in fact there’s often only time to develop one or the other. To do otherwise runs the risk of diminishing both, to the detriment of the story).
But in a thirteen hour series? There’s no excuse for both parts of the equation to be balanced
2. Danny Rand Was A Bit Of A Whiner
While Finn Jones was cast as Danny Rand/Iron Fist I was okay with the choice, though he would likely not have been mine (that would have been Cam Gigadet, who would have not only brought a welcome bit of world-weariness to the role but actually knows martial arts–Krav Maga–which could have lent a greater authenticity to the role) though the character felt a bit like a truculent child at times, which made him a bit off-putting
3. Showrunner A-Go-Go!
For better or worse, the showrunner sets the tone and direction that a series takes.
They may not write it (though if that’s their area of strength, they could), but they’ll likely chose the writers who will.
They may not direct, but will end up being the decider in terms of whom actually ends up doing so.
in other words, it’s a very influential position and likely why Scott Buck will not be returning to a second season of Marvel’s Iron Fist (he’s replaced in Season Two by Raven Metzger, who worked on Falling Skies, Heroes Reborn, Sleepy Hollow and movies like Elektra).
And a new showrunner is a great start, though–and this is stating the obvious–there had to be more martial arts.
One of my favorite martial arts movies is The Five Deadly Venoms and frankly, it’s ridiculous, particularly from a martial arts standpoint though ironically enough, that’s why it works so well. It revels in the rediculousness, while playing it relatively straight.
Now, I’m not saying that Iron Fist needs to go quite that far, but it is called ‘Iron Fist,’ not ‘Familial Squabbles with a Little Martial Arts Thrown In.’
And I’m not saying that Iron Fist needs to be as fanciful as that movie, but there should be a joyfulness, a level of dexterity for the most part missing from the first season.
Some of the changes I’ve mentioned–such as a new showrunner–have already been initiated, though arguably the most important–is the fighting because keep in mind that Danny Rand’s martial art abilities are to him what The Punisher’s penchant for violence are to him: an indispensable part of the character’s makeup.